… but where exactly?

So as you all know I haven’t mounted Bret Lockett yet.
I know, I’m slackin.

Just kidding.

Anyway, as you know from Fox past,
I featured Bret on a segment to promote his up and coming rap career.
Thanks to one of my faithful Foxes, omg007, I was informed on the music video.

See below for where Bret wants to take us…

[youtube=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rvCcyd9h4YQ]

If any baller, Wolf, Fox, or Vixen ever wants to hear the truth, you can always depend on Jamari.
Since this NFL is in a major lockout, ballers need to find part time hobbies to pay some bills.

With that being said Bret….

PROS

• He and his Wolf-like body are definitely what I needed this tired morning.
• The lead female was cute. Her forehead was a bit distracting, but she was cute.
• The location was BEAUTIFUL. Very nice visuals for us to enjoy.
• The melody of the chorus was catchy.
• The beat has a nice laid back feel.

CONS

• The flow needed some work. It started going flat and borderline corny.
• Why was he on a bike in the beginning? I felt that scene wasn’t needed.
• I felt at times it was a knock off of LL Cool’s “Paradise” video
• It came off so boasty and so typical “baller turned rapper”. Yes, we get it. You make a shitload of money, but can you talk about something that doesn’t fall into “I’m bored since I have a cake load of money and need something to do” category?
• I didn’t feel like she was totally into him. She was giving me throughout the video, “Yeah he has money, I’m fuckin’ him, and yeah that’s it.“

I felt the video and song needed something else.
It was missing something.
Maybe a female singing the hook or even some more harmonies in the chorus.
I would have made the video a tad different with some ideas flowing through my head as I was listening to the song and visualizing a different direction.

Take it how you want.
Bret you have potential.
Don’t bore us with a snooze fest.

😉

Later